Chaxu
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I liked it, you gave me an opening to join in with Naso. Now I can write something a little easier now
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3/19/2008, 12:22 am
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Jacen736
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Cool I'll look forward to it
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3/19/2008, 8:10 pm
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Lady Starhawk
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Ok, nobody hurt me, please?
From the bio I understood that Yoric was a lot like Jack Sparrow, and played him accordingly (harmless ladies man). So I'll let others decide if it's harmless flirting (like Sparrow), or something more.
It was hinted that they weren't sure if they could trust him, so I figured I would give Yoric a chance to betray them. Fortunately WT is next, and Yoric is his character .
So, how did I do for my first try?
*blushes and hides in the corner*
LS
--- "The lord of the rings trilogy restored balance to the force after the Star Wars prequels ruined everything that was awesome about being a nerd at the movies." Wil Wheton, I Love the New Milenium, 2003
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6/2/2008, 1:52 pm
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WorldTyrant
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Good job! Epic post! Good length and lots of character stuff! You deserve a confetti shower! *fanfar!*
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6/2/2008, 9:51 pm
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Lady Starhawk
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*blush*
Thanks hon.
*picks confetti out of her hair*
Epic? Now mesa confused.
Can I stop worrying about it now? *bites lip*
LS
--- "The lord of the rings trilogy restored balance to the force after the Star Wars prequels ruined everything that was awesome about being a nerd at the movies." Wil Wheton, I Love the New Milenium, 2003
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6/2/2008, 11:45 pm
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WorldTyrant
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Yes, yes you can. You'll be just fine.
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6/3/2008, 9:22 am
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Jacen736
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Very nice post Lady--you got into it!
WT, you are up!
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6/3/2008, 10:21 pm
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Lady Starhawk
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I should explain myself. I know it was probably too long..but it had to be done.
Basically...there was combat, and Skittles fell out of the narrative, so I had to deal with her “issue”.
Mean and I were talking, and he said if I separated her from the group, I should return her to the group before ending my part, even if it is a little too long. So that’s what I did.
I hope it was okay. Keep in mind I’m still new to this, so if I messed up, please let me know what I did wrong, and then forgive me.
Thanks.
LS
--- "The lord of the rings trilogy restored balance to the force after the Star Wars prequels ruined everything that was awesome about being a nerd at the movies." Wil Wheton, I Love the New Milenium, 2003
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Lady Starhawk
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So, two-part post again...not by much though. I was only 315 characters over.
So Yoric is back in the realm of bad guy, but with the option of being a good guy if/when WT chooses.
A new bio-warfare project is now on the table.
Unfortunately, I had to kind of mess with the last two posts...and I feel bad about that, making them hallucinations, but it was the best way to get Yoric back to a bad guy and still move the plot along in an interesting way.
Hopefully I did alright.
So I get that cookie, and cake WT?
LS
--- "The lord of the rings trilogy restored balance to the force after the Star Wars prequels ruined everything that was awesome about being a nerd at the movies." Wil Wheton, I Love the New Milenium, 2003
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7/16/2008, 3:01 pm
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Yes, you get lovely treats. o:
Post is up! I'm going to be gone between the 22nd and the 30th, but I'll have irregular internet access. Try not to go to far without me! =p
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7/21/2008, 2:37 pm
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